西山放牛娃 发表于 2010-6-3 18:14   全显示 1楼
作者极具色文写手的资质和能力，文字语言运用娴熟，人物塑造尤其是人物心理和
行为细节的刻划相当的老到，情景描写以及配角人物的描写也充满了烘托的效果，
「涨得生疼」的主题被描绘得惟妙惟肖，而一个并不美满的结局又使全文不下了回
味，肉戏描写虽泼墨不多，但却恰到好处，把那种青涩的感觉展现了出来。

很期待作者已经构思好的故事下半部分，呵呵……
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